Jamie Jupiter

The girl who is out of this world...literally!

JJ Season1 Ep1 Page 6

14th Feb 2012, 5:26 PM in Jamie Jupiter Season One
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JJ Season1 Ep1 Page 6
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KarToon12 14th Feb 2012, 5:26 PM edit delete
KarToon12
Meanwhile, a shadowy monster claims a victim! D:
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Doomy 14th Feb 2012, 6:15 PM edit delete reply
Doomy
So this explains why principals are so evil!

They always claim to be your 'pals' but we know better than to believe in that.

EDIT: Anyway, I am all caught-up, sweetie.
I am liking this comic so far even though anatomy and proportions needs a touch of improvement, I'm sure you will be able to overcome that and make this comic great. ♥
KarToon12 15th Feb 2012, 5:48 PM edit delete reply
KarToon12
XDXDXD

Don't worry; he's a good guy. He's just,um...under the influence right now...^^;;;

I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. :D I see what you mean about the proportions. These pages are kind of old. I think the ones I've done recently are better. I've been experimenting with different angles and stuff too.
Darthdespario 14th Feb 2012, 8:32 PM edit delete reply
Darthdespario
dun dun duuuunnn

this guy went from a chill principal to creepy as heck in ten seconds flat. Geez.

I like that last panel, its just so well done. I really love the creepy feeling it gives off.

my only critique thus far for you is to try and keep "on model" a bit more. The character proportions and head shapes have morphed several times during pages.

That being said, I really like the writing for this page. Its really good. The pacing is appropriate and the panels do a good job of showing the events. Keep going :D
KarToon12 15th Feb 2012, 5:53 PM edit delete reply
KarToon12
This is just the tip of the iceberg; he's going to get FAR creepier later. D:

Thanks for the advice. Proportions and staying on model is something I'm always struggling with, because I'm always trying to get better, and try new angles and stuff, and by doing that, sometimes it makes the characters look slightly different. ^^;;; But I'm working to correct that.

Thanks. We'll get back to the alien stuff later. Next up, we're going to be introduced to one more main character. ^^
davemation 15th Feb 2012, 1:41 AM edit delete reply
davemation
I like the shadow, it give a good effect.
KarToon12 15th Feb 2012, 5:46 PM edit delete reply
KarToon12
Thanks; didn't want to reveal the monster too early. ;)
vwyler 28th Feb 2012, 8:14 AM edit delete reply
vwyler
Another Easter egg. Mr. (George) Lucas. ^-^
GeekPrime 16th Sep 2012, 8:33 PM edit delete reply
GeekPrime
Wait, "Harryhousen" as in Monsters Inc.?
Quieteyes 22nd Jun 2014, 1:09 PM edit delete reply
{snicker} I guess that's an age thing. The restaurant in Monsters Inc. and the high school's name are both referencing the stop-motion special effects artist Ray Harryhausen. His work was considered break-through at the time, though it looks incredibly dated now.