Jamie Jupiter

The girl who is out of this world...literally!

JJ Season1 Ep2 Page20

8th May 2012, 7:03 PM in Jamie Jupiter Season One
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JJ Season1 Ep2 Page20
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KarToon12 8th May 2012, 7:03 PM edit delete
KarToon12
Okay, so how many of you REALLY thought Daspl was dead? XD
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Darthdespario 8th May 2012, 7:32 PM edit delete reply
Darthdespario
I KNEW it!
lol

I really like the story thus far. You've done a good job writing the characters.
I get the feeling that Clara is going to be trouble... At least for now.

Also, license plate.
KarToon12 9th May 2012, 2:32 PM edit delete reply
KarToon12
I'm really glad you're enjoying it. I was initially really nervous about sharing my first, original story, so I'm very happy that people have responded so kindly to it. ^^
vwyler 8th May 2012, 8:24 PM edit delete reply
vwyler
What?! He isn't dead?! o_o No, I knew that. :)

KarToon12 9th May 2012, 2:32 PM edit delete reply
KarToon12
I wouldn't kill off the villain THAT quick. XD
RG2Cents 9th May 2012, 12:39 AM edit delete reply
RG2Cents
I thought he'd be coming back, but I wasn't sure how. I really like the way you worked it out. You let the reader know without one word of dialogue. Nicely done! :->
KarToon12 9th May 2012, 2:33 PM edit delete reply
KarToon12
Goes to show that maybe they should've inspected her car a bit more...D:
Slim Kittens 9th May 2012, 3:30 AM edit delete reply
Slim Kittens
You have a real talent for developing a story. Not rushing it, not dragging it out. All the pages you've posted so far feel like they're necessary to tell the tale.
KarToon12 9th May 2012, 2:35 PM edit delete reply
KarToon12
Thanks a lot. :) That's the one thing I always get nervous about; making sure that each page has a purpose. If it's not moving the plot forward, then it should at least be developing the characters more.
man in black 9th May 2012, 7:23 PM edit delete reply
man in black
closer than she thinks
KarToon12 10th May 2012, 3:34 PM edit delete reply
KarToon12
Yeah...too close...D: