Jamie Jupiter

The girl who is out of this world...literally!

JJ Season1 Ep1 Page 24

21st Mar 2012, 2:52 PM in Jamie Jupiter Season One
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JJ Season1 Ep1 Page 24
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KarToon12 21st Mar 2012, 2:52 PM edit delete
KarToon12
Run! Run for your lives! D:

(Just four more pages to go...)
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Darthdespario 21st Mar 2012, 3:43 PM edit delete reply
Darthdespario
Oh no! What is he doing there?!

Nice page, I love the third panel. Its not the best, but its very dynamic.

I also love the intensity, especially in the fifth panel.

Is Clara taking pictures?
KarToon12 22nd Mar 2012, 2:43 PM edit delete reply
KarToon12
I actually kinda' based this off of the first live action Transformers movie. I liked how there wasn't this huge, overly complicated set up for Sam and Mikalea getting together. Sam literally just ran into her while being chased by Barracade. So I thought that kind of pacing worked here.

Thanks; one of many awkward attempts at foreshortening. ^^;;; But I've done worse. XD

I imagine slow motion in that fifth panel. XD

Yep; she is. She wouldn't miss out on this.
Nightsky 21st Mar 2012, 4:11 PM edit delete reply
Nightsky
It's so obvious what Clara's thinking: "WHAT THE HECK IS GOING ON!?"

And then, somewhere deep inside her brain, she's also thinking "This is the story of the century!"

Bad timing for Tyler, though.
KarToon12 22nd Mar 2012, 2:45 PM edit delete reply
KarToon12
I'm really glad to hear that it's obvious to you, because that's what I was going for. I don't want to always explain everything in words. I've been trying to get better with poses and expressions to hint at what they're thinking.

Bad timing, yes...but he's also about to be swept up into the adventure of a lifetime. :D
Scott A1 Nixaju 21st Mar 2012, 4:34 PM edit delete reply
KarToon12 keep up the Great job on your comic Hope to see more of your comics.
KarToon12 22nd Mar 2012, 2:45 PM edit delete reply
KarToon12
Thanks; glad you're liking it. :)
vwyler 21st Mar 2012, 6:48 PM edit delete reply
vwyler
Awww! You should've drawn the head-on collision! XD
KarToon12 22nd Mar 2012, 2:46 PM edit delete reply
KarToon12
I was trying to go for surprise. ^^;; XD It's mostly from her point of view, so she got knocked senseless. XD
RG2Cents 22nd Mar 2012, 12:53 AM edit delete reply
RG2Cents
Wow! Crashed right through and is still giving chase! Don't know how they're gonna stop ol' Redeyes...
KarToon12 22nd Mar 2012, 2:47 PM edit delete reply
KarToon12
Psycho-principal isn't foolin' around. D:

You'll see how they stop him in part two. :D
man in black 22nd Mar 2012, 1:10 AM edit delete reply
man in black
Seems running isn't going to work
KarToon12 22nd Mar 2012, 2:47 PM edit delete reply
KarToon12
Nope; time to face the monster. >:)
cocoadagio 22nd Mar 2012, 3:20 AM edit delete reply
cocoadagio
Oh wow, he's a lot better than my vita mix blender! :3

These two pages are real awesome KarToon girl!! I so look forward to the next pages! *u*
KarToon12 22nd Mar 2012, 2:48 PM edit delete reply
KarToon12
XDXDXD

I'm glad you're enjoying it! Just a few more pages to go!
LooeyQ 22nd Mar 2012, 7:16 PM edit delete reply
LooeyQ
Oh man, maybe I was right to read his line in arnold schwarzenegger's voice, he's totally running after the girls T-1000 style!!!!
KarToon12 23rd Mar 2012, 3:49 PM edit delete reply
KarToon12
XDXDXD
LooeyQ 22nd Mar 2012, 7:38 PM edit delete reply
LooeyQ
Now IM offically caught up! :D
Man this story reads like its a movie, especially the intro to the comic, I always love and appreciate a good intro to any story, Great stuff so far!!!! awesome job!!!
KarToon12 23rd Mar 2012, 3:49 PM edit delete reply
KarToon12
Thanks! I'm really glad you're enjoying it so far! ^^ And yeah; sometimes I imagine the events like a movie, so I can think up of different angles to draw it at.
AgentBreadCrumbs 23rd Mar 2012, 5:22 AM edit delete reply
AgentBreadCrumbs
4 more pages?! That means 8 more days! AHHh, I can't handle that! haha. I really love this Cas. :) I was like, oh, next page, next page, next page....whatt....*tears* no more pages. haha. Definitely keep up with this from now on.
KarToon12 23rd Mar 2012, 3:50 PM edit delete reply
KarToon12
Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it! The action is REALLY going to pick up soon. :)