Jamie Jupiter

The girl who is out of this world...literally!

JJ Season1 Ep1 Page 1

4th Feb 2012, 4:41 PM in Jamie Jupiter Season One
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JJ Season1 Ep1 Page 1
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KarToon12 4th Feb 2012, 4:41 PM edit delete
KarToon12
A meteor crashes to Earth...or is it something else?
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Darthdespario 4th Feb 2012, 8:40 PM edit delete reply
Darthdespario
Interesting ^^

I really like the way you do space effects. and bravo to you for panel four. It really has some energy to it.
One thing I'll point out about the dialogue though, one thing I recommend is splitting up the balloons within the panels. For instance, in panel 2 you could get away with splitting them at "all through the week" and "and just to remind" If you make those two paragraphs into separate balloons it will look even better.

Anyway, love the page, keep it up! :D
KarToon12 4th Feb 2012, 11:42 PM edit delete reply
KarToon12
Thanks! I'm putting my best effort into making this the best it can be.

I see what you mean about splitting the balloons. As time went on, I figured out how to do it, so that kind of thing will show up in the later pages. Manga Studio is still a big Pandora's box to figure out. XD
Low 8th Feb 2012, 12:03 AM edit delete reply
Low
Fantastic intro! Very well executed.
KarToon12 9th Feb 2012, 2:03 AM edit delete reply
KarToon12
Thanks! :D We'll have some character introductions next, but this "meteor" will come into play soon enough.
KittyMariePrince 11th Feb 2012, 7:51 PM edit delete reply
KittyMariePrince
This page looks awesome. The 'meteor' flying and crashing looks so kool, as does the outer space looks.
KarToon12 12th Feb 2012, 1:11 AM edit delete reply
KarToon12
Thanks! Outer space is one of my favorite things to draw/color. ^^ You'll find out what the "meteor" was in due time.
Doomy 14th Feb 2012, 5:30 PM edit delete reply
Doomy
Woah nice, I love the fiery-effect.

Great way to start. x]
KarToon12 15th Feb 2012, 5:53 PM edit delete reply
KarToon12
Thanks; I'm happy how it turned out. :D
Auggie 6th Mar 2012, 4:16 AM edit delete reply
Auggie
I love the cheerful radio broadcast over what looks like something not so cheerful.
JasonDeroga 16th Jul 2013, 12:09 AM edit delete reply
JasonDeroga
Auggie took the words right out of my mouth! Yes, the irony of the dialogue from the weatherman and the "meteor" makes for an amusing first page! =)